So our Screenwriting teacher selected me and four other people to exemplify our Rising Action scenes (scenes where things indeed happen) and I suppose this is all fine and dandy. Fellow chambermates are to make 5 comments, suggestions, ransom notes or whathaveyou about our scenes. I suppose this is alright too. My scenes don't make a lot of clinical sense by themselves. No one knows that Eva is 19. No one knows that David is a crazy Jew. No one knows that my brand of humor is a little offputting at the least, especially when the characters are shouting "WHOA NUTS" and "HOLY SHITBALLS." Again, 19 and crazy Jew. Total sense. WHEN KNOWN.
Anywho